Mike arrived home, furious. He had rushed home on orders from his wife, and just managed to catch the train. Exhausted, he tried to claim the last seat, but was barged out of the way by a lanky, long-haired lout, who told him to ‘eff off Grandad’.
Mum had gone all out thought Liz as she glanced through to the dining room. Clasping Zed’s hand she dragged him in to meet her parents.
“This is Zed:” you finally got to meet him. She looked at Mike, “I’m so excited Dad, we’re expecting a baby”.
Zed reddened, “We’ve met, Congratulations Grandad!”
This was written as a challenge for Writing 101, I have chosen to write a story in 100 words as it is so different in both word count and in content to what I normally write; fiction writing is totally out of my comfort zone.
Me thinks you have discovered another part of your wonderful writing talents. It’s really good – keep going!
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That is so kind of you to say Daffy. I struggled quite a bit with this sort of writing. 🙂
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I think you need to spend more time outside your comfort zone, that’s great. I enjoyed the tale and thought it well put together and fun
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Thank you Steve, I am thrilled you thought so 🙂
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That is Great Judy and you said you had no imagination☺
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I don’t have a lot . Thanks Rich 🙂
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More than you think☺
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Thank you 🙂
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Great story Judy!!!
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Thanks Ritu 🙂
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You just never know when the second meeting will happen…LOL
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Yes, indeed! I think words might be spoken when they are alone!
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I enjoyed this, didn’t see the twist coming. x
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Thank you:-)
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I never know what to say about fiction.
Good on you for having a go at all challenges.
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Thanks, it is always refreshing to try something new 🙂
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Well done you! xxx
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Well, step out of your comfort zone more often, girl. This is good 😉
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Thank you Aimer for your kindness, I might have another go if the situation arises 🙂
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Bwahahaha! I don’t imagine that relationship went well!
You did a great job!! I didn’t even guess the ending!
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No indeed, it might get a little tricky when they are left alone!
Glad you didn’t guess the ending 🙂
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Me too! 🙂
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Nice one Edwina! You’re good in fictions, really! 😀
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Don’t stop now… Very well crafted and a hoot.
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Haha, fantastic story. You are good at fiction 🙂
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Thank you Erika 🙂
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😊
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This should go well!
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Ha ha! Yes indeed.😆
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This is short and spicy😊😄 Oh my , I would have loved to be there. Lovely set up!
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Thanks Jacqueline 😊
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You are welcome 🙂
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That’s a whole lot of info in just 100 words. Well done! 🙂
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Thank you Debby. I was trying to do it in 50 but could not manage it! 🙂
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Well done! 🙂
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Hello, and thanks for stopping by. I am Judy, in my (very) early fifties and decided that life definitely gets more interesting as it goes on! I am a wife and a mum and have just finished University as a Registered Nurse, after having worked as an Associate Practitioner in the NHS. I am also a poet and the author of my debut book, 'Rhymes of the Times.' I love to laugh, and I love rhyming words too, so I joined the two together, and my book was born. I am currently working on another book in the series also. I am a prolific blogger and enjoy writing funny stories, anecdotes, and anything really that takes my fancy.
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