Stephanie from ‘Once Upon your Prime ‘ did a fantastic spoof on ‘Twas The Night Before Christmas’ which you can read here. I was so impressed with her version, and I wanted to have a go at this myself. Every year I have to read it every night in December to my daughter. we take it in turns to read a verse out each, and we both love it. I have not gone with a theme as Stephanie has, just given it a bit of jiggery-pokery here and there to give my take on it!! Hope you enjoy…
‘Twas the night before Christmas, with presents to wrap
The turkey still thawing, no time for a nap!
The stocking was dragged out from last year
We’re hoping and praying St Nick will appear!
Miss Hap was all nestled snugly in bed
With iPhones and Converses going around in her head
Mr Grump, me and Roxy at last went to bed
To get ourselves rested for the big day ahead!
When out on the square there arose such a row
I awoke to see what was happening now!
I looked out the window and saw a large crowd
“Bugger off home!”. I shouted out loud.
The moon was hidden by a cloudy grey sky
But I thought I saw something out the corner of me eye.
Eight lively reindeer so happy and bright
Were guiding a sleigh through the darkness of night.
With a little old driver so chubby and cute
Who appeared to be wearing a red and white suit!
His reindeer were racing enjoying the game
He wanted attention so called them by name.
Now Dasher, now Dancer now Prancer and Vixen
On Comet, on Cupid, on Donner and Blitzen
Head for the roof! Head for the trees!
Now hurry up, hurry up, hurry up please!
As dry leaves that before the wild hurricane fly
Are swirling around in the wintery sky
This little old man with his sleigh full of toys
Was ready to reward the good girls and boys.
And then in a twinkling I heard on the roof
The clanking and banging of their bloody great hooves!
The next thing I knew, I heard a loud ‘BOOM’
And St Nicholas had landed in my front room!
He was dressed all in fur from his head to his toes
And I couldn’t help smiling at his odd-looking clothes
He had a large sack that was filled to the top
He looked like a man who had just robbed a shop!
His eyes how they twinkled in spite of his years
His nose was all rosy – and so were his ears!
His mouth was formed into a huge cheesy grin
He appeared as if he’d been hitting the gin!
The butt off a cig was clenched in his lips
And his belt was a little sung round his hips.
The size of his tummy was really quite shocking
And it swayed side to side as if it were rocking!
He was jolly and plump a right happy old thing
And I was excited to see what gift he would bring
He looked at his sack and gave me a smile
And added a parcel to Miss Hap’s huge pile!
He spoke not a word but kept filling her stocking
Then gave me a look that was kind of mocking
And then in an instant he was no longer there
He appeared to have vanished into the night air.
He sprang to his sleigh as night became dawn
And then he was off. It was now Christmas Morn
But I heard him call out as he opened a beer
“Merry Christmas to all, and a Happy New Year!”
Hehehe! So cool!
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Thanks 🙂
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Too cute!
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Thanks, just a bit of Christmas silliness. 🙂
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You are so clever!
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Thanks, I had my daughter’s help. We just thought it would be fun to do 🙂
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Been out of town and just seeing this now. Absolutely perfect! And extra special that you did it together with daughter. I hope you guys are having a terrific Christmas and it really makes me happy that a post of mine inspired all this brilliance!!
Stephanie
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Thanks so much Stephanie. We really had fun doing it, and thank you for the inspiration.:-)
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Loved this. Thanks so much for being part of my blogging journey this year. I’ve loved having a sister across the water.
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Glad you liked it. The feeling is mutual sister.! You have kept me highly entertained this year, and I am looking forward to more fun and shenanigans in the new year xx
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Xoxo
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Reblogged this on Edwina's Episodes and commented:
I thought I would recycle my take on ‘ The Night Before Christmas’
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You’ve just given me something to share with my kids 🙂 Thank you my lady Edwina. I like this version 🙂
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Thank you so much Jacqui, we had fun doing it 🙂
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Wow, that is awesome! First of all the story idea itself, but also the flow of words. Never something that sounde just to put in shape in order to rhyme! I love it, Judy! It made me smile and gave me such a warm feeling in my heart… the Christmas Spirit!
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Thank you Erika. I kept some of the original lines and just added bits in, It was such fun to do. 🙂
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It is very good. While reading I found myself like in a movie when you want to no how it continues…. !!!
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I am so pleased you enjoyed it so much Erika 🙂
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I really did, Judy. And I felt the joy you felt while writing!
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I am glad that it came across 🙂
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Totally 😘😘
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Great poem, Judy. So clever. Thanks for the morning chuckle.
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Glad you enjoyed it Diana 🙂
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Excellent! I like the addition of the beer – much more realistic than milk and cookies. 🙂
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Thank you, yes I thought that Santa might need something a little stronger after all of his hard work! 🙂
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And there was me thinking that Santa enjoyed a Sherry!
Great writing, Judy. Glad you reblogged it as it’s a great Christmas poem. One that you should bring out every December with all the Christmas decorations.
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I am glad you enjoyed it Hugh. I thought it could do with trotting out again!! 😆
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Reblogged this on Simply Marquessa.
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Thanks so much for the reblog 🙂
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I’ll be reblogging this before Christmas!☝
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Judy, this is so darn good! I love it! 💗
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Thanks Colleen. I wrote it last year with my daughter, WE had great fun doing it ::-)
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Now, its even better! A family accomplishment! Stupendous! 💗🎄🎅
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Thank you 🙂
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That was great.
Happy New Year!
Melinda
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Glad you enjoyed it. Happy New Year to you too Melinda. I look forward to 2016 🙂
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Thanks! Me too!
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Thanks so much for the reblog. So glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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