I wrote this poem about depression; how it makes me feel and getting through the other side.
In the depths of darkness and despair
I feel so alone, like no-one is there
Surrounded by dangers unseen and unheard
Trapped and frightened, like a caged bird
Thoughts so jumbled, make no sense
But pain and heartache are so intense
From the world, I just want to hide
And keep my feelings bottled up inside
But wait, there is something that has caught my eye
It looks blurry through the tears I cry
Yes, it’s shimmering and shining bright
A distant glimmer, shaft of light
It seems so very far away
But I know I can draw closer day by day
From my dark corner there is hope
And support to help me cope
The light grows brighter every day
My world has gone from black to grey
I continue onwards, spirits rising
My soul had started re-energizing
I came through the other side
With just a sparkle as my guide.
***
If you suffer with depression, I have written a post with some strategies I use for coping that might help, which you can read here.
Beautiful poem about your journey, Judy. I love the way it ends. 🙂
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Thank you, Diana. I wanted to end on a positive note. 🙂
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You did it. 🙂
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🙂
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I have been saved by a sparkle myself! ❤
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I am happy to hear that, Annette. Although it appears jut out of reach, it is possible to get to it 🙂 ??
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Oh that’s beautiful, Judy! I feel certain that this will inspire all who read it. Keep that sparkle! ❤
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This is a beautiful thought sis that a sparkle can guide you though the darkness!
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Thanks, Sis. Sometimes there is just a teeny glimpse, but once you realise it is there then it is something to steer towards 🙂
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The light at the end of the tunnel, so to speak 🙂
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Yes, exactly 🙂
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I haven’t had depression myself but I have a close friend who manages her bi-polar. It’s a struggle. I’m glad you can articulate so clearly how you’ve felt (because others can’t always understand).
JP
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It is tricky trying to explain, because not only does it look like there is nothing wrong with us, but some people don’t get that we can become depressed when we seemingly have nothing to be depressed about! 🙂
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This is lovely and your poem describes so eloquently what it looks like coming out of it!
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Thank you, Terri 🙂
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Judy, this poem is so beautiful and strong. I could feel each word of it. Thanks so much for sharing.
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I am glad that you could relate to it, Elizabeth 🙂
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I suspect that there are few poems about depression which end on such a positive note. I like the imagery and the hope.
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I agree, April. Depression is always there lurking in the background. However, coming through a particularly dark period feels like there is a bit of a sparkle left in life.
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This is lovely & very inspiring x
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Thank you xx
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Beautiful poem x
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Thank you, Lucy 🙂
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Lovely expression of a place we have all been, maybe too often. Thanks.
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Really resonated with me Judy. Especially the transition of our view from black to grey. And you’re so right. There is hope, no matter how bleak.
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Yes, that little tiny glint in the distance that gives us a shred of hope 🙂
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I like to carry some starlight in my pocket, just in case 🙂 Wonderful poem, Judy!
P.S. I have no idea why I was not following the blog – just randomly disappeared!
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I love that you keep a bit of starlight with you, Prajakta. Don’t worry, I have had several other bloggers tell me that I jut disappeared too, I think WordPress are having a bit of fun with me!!
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Judy, I appreciate how you capture the slump, yet encourage the rise. Thanks for adding tips!
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Beautiful words
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Thanks, Sam 🙂
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Hello, and thanks for stopping by. I am Judy, in my (very) early fifties and decided that life definitely gets more interesting as it goes on! I am a wife and a mum and have just finished University as a Registered Nurse, after having worked as an Associate Practitioner in the NHS. I am also a poet and the author of my debut book, 'Rhymes of the Times.' I love to laugh, and I love rhyming words too, so I joined the two together, and my book was born. I am currently working on another book in the series also. I am a prolific blogger and enjoy writing funny stories, anecdotes, and anything really that takes my fancy.
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