Majestically it stands there
Surveying all it sees
The winter branches barren
Devoid of lush green leaves.
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Yet life is still within it
Just waiting for the spring
When its buds start blooming
And the birds begin to sing
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In summer comes its glory
When it wears a party dress
Of several different colours
Its beauty outshines the rest
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Then autumn comes a-calling
And it starts a slow striptease
The leaves are changing colour
And are dropping in the breeze
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This is the work of nature
Of death and then re-birth
The barren and the beautiful
The treasures from the earth.
This is a poem I wrote some time ago, that I thought would fit the bill perfectly for my understanding of a vignette, the task for today’s Writing 101 course.
What a brilliantly beautiful poem Eddie – just love the ‘slow striptease’.
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Thanks Daffy, I am so glad you liked it
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Wow. You have created such a creative poem with a rather simple subject, the tree. What more can I say? 🙂
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Thank you. I love the changes a tree goes throughout the seasons 🙂
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You’re welcome! It’s my pleasure. 🙂
And yes, tree is indeed a lovely creature. 😀
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That is really lovely, Judy 🙂
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It is one of my favourites that I have written. 🙂
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It is beautiful and for me full of metphors 🙂
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I tired hard to portray vivid images with metaphor. I am pleased you got it 🙂
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Definitely, Judy! You did wonderful. The pictures just showed up in my mind 🙂
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Thank you for popping in and commenting 🙂
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That is awesome Judy, see you are a poet with a great imagination😉
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Thank you Rich. That is lovely of you 🙂
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I love poems about nature. Your observations here are so unique. Love the slow strip-tease. Brilliantly written. Loved this piece!
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Thank you so much Belinda. I am glad you liked it. It is one of my favourites that I have written.
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I can see why! It’s lovely.
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This is a great poem Judy! ☺
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Thank you Ritu 🙂
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This is really beautiful, Judy. 🙂
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Very beautiful phrases.
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Thank you 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂
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