For this week’s Writespiration, Sacha has given us ‘blackout’- to use as our prompt. I wasn’t sure which way to go with it, but this is what I ended up with!
As I sit there watching the big screen
All settled in for the night
Everything’s suddenly gone quiet
And someone has turned off the light.
The pitch black makes me feel nervous
I don’t like being here on my own
I can’t haven’t got any candles
And the where in the hell is my phone?
It feels like the set of a movie
Where the killer is hiding upstairs
Waiting until the right moment
To capture his prey, unawares
My heart is starting to race now
My throat is all parched and dry
I need to go to the toilet
And I’m just about ready to cry!
When, suddenly a massive explosion
Of light and sound dims my fears
I can relax and calm down now
As the opening credits appear.
O.u.t.s.t.a.n.d.i.n.g. 😀 😛 :-8
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Thanks, Tess 🙂
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You are welcome, Judy. 🙂
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Ha ha! I remember watching The Shining at university one night while defrosting the freezer… The random cracking of ice in the background really added to the spooky atmosphere… Bet you’d have been properly freaked out by that!
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I am the biggest wimp going, Al. I have seen the shining ,and a load of other horror films when I was younger, but the Exorcist was one step too much for me and I couldn’t watch it!
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Hahaha…. fantastic, Sis! You kept me thrilled from the first line on!
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Thank you Sis, I was trying to keep up the suspense! 🙂
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And you did that successfully 😊
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This was brilliant sis!
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Thank you, Sis. I was not sure where I was going to go with it at first! 🙂
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I may try this too… is it fiction or posting on anything?
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Most people write flash fiction sis. Sacha gives us the topic each week to write about, usually in less than 200 words. Go and check out her blog as the entries are in the comments. 🙂
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Cool thanks sis… I went with the flow last night, not fiction but a ramble of sorts!!
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I’ve seen it and commented 🙂
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Most excellent, Judy. Wonderful take on the prompt 🙂
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Thanks, Diana 🙂
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Excellent take on the lights going out. I could feel the panic in your words. Nicely written. Just an aside comment about horror movies. It was the Nightmare on Elm Street movies that disturbed me. When the story line entered my real dream life that was it. No more horror for me.
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Thanks so much Olga. I can’t watch them any more either as they give me nightmares! 🙂
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Hi Judy, you always funny, I was read for a tragedy to happen in this story, but only the credits showing up…
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HaHA! I decided not to get all gory!! 🙂
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Splendid Judy, all the different elements you managed to include, Pathos, Comedy, Tension You should be directing films.
xxx Hugs Galore xxx
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Ha! THanks David for your kind words. Huge hugs xxxx
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Neat Judy; you’re the mistress of the rhyming couplet
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Why thank you, kind Geoff. That is a lovely compliment 🙂
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Wonderful, Judy! 🙂
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Great writing Judy. Loved the twist at the end. 🙂
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Thank you Debby 🙂
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